Sunday 8 November 2015

My fantasy novel

So, I have been writing on a fantasy novel for over six years now and I'm still into writing. I'm on page 307 and I am far from finished! However, I write this novel in German which is a shame for you because I would love to give you guys a little insight on my book. But thanks to a good friend of mine, I have now translated the first chapter into English so that you guys can have a little preview of what will (hopefully) turn out to be a proper novel.


The Legend of Alteria

Chapter 1



At the horizon four men were visible upon a hill, their long, blond hair blew in the wind. Motionless and ignoring the roaring wind they stared with fixed looks on the castle in the distance. The men were clothed in black so they were almost unrecognisable in the darkness and their blood-red eyes pierced the night like arrows. The man in the middle stepped forward. He glanced at his companions for a moment then he clicked his fingers. The four masked figures had disappeared. With speed for the human eye almost unseeable they moved towards the city wall. The entrance portal was guarded by several soldiers in heavy armour, they did not notice the four. Their leader now fixed them with his eyes, it seemed like he wanted to pierce them with his look. Suddenly, the soldiers fell unconscious to the ground.

The men were visible again.

“Very good.” Their leader said. „We don’t have much time. Nothing is allowed to go wrong.”

He nodded to his companions and turned invisible. Until this moment everything had gone well, it seemed like nobody had noticed them.

v   

Inside the castle everything was silent, not even the roaring of the wind or the distant murmuring of the soldiers could be heard. In the halls all doors were closed except one. The clear voice of a woman who seemed to sing something came from the room,

Queen Lira was singing to her daughter Lorane before she went to bed. On a long, high-pitched note the song ended and the woman left the room quietly.

As soon as she heard the sound of the closing door Lorane sprang from her bed and hurried towards her wardrobe against which she knocked. A repeated knock came from within. Lorane opened the door and with a silent cry a boy fell to the ground. Quickly he stood up and looked at the girl who said:

 “You do know that I can’t always let you sleep here in secret, Paul?”

The boy smiled peevishly, ran a hand through his black hair and got a mattress out of the wardrobe.


After Lira had gone back to her quarters she had sat in front of the big, bronze mirror and was now combing her long, dark-red hair; she did this every time before she went to bed although her husband had said that this was unnecessary. Lira laughed as she just now thought about that again and turned around to Merow who was sitting in a chair, reading. He ran a hand through his hazelnut-brown hair and yawned.

“Just put the book to the side.” Lira said. “You’ve been sitting in this chair the entire day, it’s time to go to bed.”

Merow smiled at her, Lira did the same, then he closed his book.

“Well, you’re right. I’m also slowly getting tired.”

The same moment he had arisen from the chair, somebody knocked at the door. He looked at Lira questioningly and frowned. Who was knocking at this time, Merow thought and walked to the door. He opened it and a young man stood in front of him, panting, he seemed all flustered and was completely out of breath.

“What happened? Why are you knocking here in the middle of the night?”

Lira observed with a tense look how the man whispered something to Merow, made some wild gestures with his hands and then disappeared. Merow closed the door and turned around to his wife.

“What did the man want?“ she asked.

It took a moment then Merow looked at her and said in a dry voice:

“You should go to her.”


Lorane threw a sheet over the mattress and a pillow as well.

“I don’t know if I have blanket left...” she murmured and bowed into her wardrobe.

Paul tossed himself on the mattress and extended his leg with relish. He took a book from Lorane’s nightstand and began to read in it.

The door opened and the bright shine of the torches outside in the hallway threw its light into the room. Paul looked up from the book and immediately jumped up. Lorane went to him to see who was standing in the door.

“Paul, what are you doing here?”

The boy stuttered a few times but did not manage it to utter a proper word.

“Mum, why did you come back?” Lorane asked when she had recognised her mother.

Lira had a look around the room as if she expected any second another one of her daughter’s friends to appear in the room.

“Paul, could you come here please?”

Hesitantly and with a red face he stepped up to her.

“You’re a brave boy, aren’t you?”

Paul nodded slowly.

“Then I’m sure you can do me a favour?”

He nodded again. Lira bent down to him and whispered something in his ear. When she had risen she asked:

“Can you do that?”

Again Paul nodded even though not in a very convincing manner. Lira walked to the small table which stood beside Lorane’s bed and reached for a piece of paper. Hastily she wrote something on it and put if folded with a gentle smile into Paul’s hand.

“What’s going on, mum?” Lorane asked sadly. “Are you angry because I secretly let Paul into my room?”

Lira laughed and took a few steps towards her daughter.

“No, of course not. Perhaps it’s even good that you did that.”

“Really?” Lorane asked in disbelief.

Lira took her hand heaved her on her bed.

“Listen to me, little one. You have to listen very carefully because this is very important what I’m about to tell you. I want you to go with Paul and leave the city.”

Lorane looked at her with big eyes but did not say anything.

“Run as fast as you can and don’t get held up, do you understand me?”

Lorane nodded and since her mother did not say anything else she asked:

“Why am I supposed to leave the city? Are you and dad coming with us?”

Lira shook her head.

“It’s important that you go alone, I must stay here with dad.”

“But why should we go?” Lorane asked impatiently and looked sadly into her mother’s eyes.

She was looking for an answer but it took long until she had found it.

“Do you remember what I have told you about the men from the mountains?” Lira asked. “Those men are here tonight and it’s important that they won’t find you.”

She could clearly see the horror in Lorane’s childish face, she was beyond frightened. Lira patted her head slowly and smiled gently. She did not want to make her even more nervous.

“I’ll stay here with dad so those evil men cannot follow you. Your father is already looking for them. Now hurry, get dressed, quick!”

Lorane slipped slowly from her bed and quickly put on a jumper and trousers over her blue nightshirt. Paul was already standing at the door and looked with a long neck into the hallway.

“Mum, I don’t want to go!”

Lorane was pulling at her mother’s arm and looked at her with big, sad eyes.

“Little one” Lira said and bowed down to her. “Don’t worry, everything will be fine. You’re not leaving our home forever. We will get you back home.”

Lorane tried to smile but she could not. The mix of tears of utmost sadness and a desperate laughter, to see on the face of one’s own daughter, was a sight a mother like Lira would not forget for a long time.

“Really? I’m definitely going to see you again?” Lorane asked.

Lira hesitated for a very short moment.

Definitely.”

“How long will it be?” Lorane asked curiously.

Lira smiled at her again then she said melancholically:

“I don’t know.“

She took her daughter’s hand, it was shaking. Lorane embraced her mother long and extensively then Lira gave her a kiss upon her cheek; she noticed that Lorane was trying very hard to keep back a river of tears.

“Now, hurry up you two! I love you.“ she added when she let go of her hand then she turned to Paul. Don’t forget what I told you.”

He nodded silently and grabbed Lorane’s hand. Hesitantly she let herself led away by him and looked back at the door of her room as long as she could when they came to a turning in the long hallway where a soldier was waiting for them.  

v   

The city of Rectis was silent, nothing could be heard not even the howling of lost animals or the whispering of the trees. Only the roaring of the wind echoed through the alleys of the big city and knocked at the windows here and there.

Lorane stepped through the portal and right away a warm breath of air blew into her face. She looked around with a puzzled expression; no guards were at the entrance to the castle although there were usually ten people guarding the portal.

“Come, we have to hurry.” The soldier said.

Paul pulled Lorane impatiently with him. Quickly they walked down the streets, over the market place and further towards the city wall. 

Suddenly various screams, the shattering of armour, loud, confusing shrieking and eventually a quiet laughter from one of the alleyways. Lorane paused immediately and Paul as well stopped next to her abruptly.

“What was that?“ she asked and look around hastily.

Paul did not answer and shrugged helplessly.

“Wait here.” The soldier let them know and walked towards the direction where the noises had been coming from.

As soon as he had disappeared around the corner it was all silent again. Lorane and Paul waited. They waited long, too long. When Paul wanted to take Lorane’s hand again to finally continue, Lorane suddenly started running.

 “It came from over there!” she murmured.

Paul ran after her as fast as he could. Lorane turned into the same alley the soldier had, ran along a little side street until she reached a backyard.

Both closed their eyes a bit so they could better observe the scenery. A crowd of soldiers lay on the ground and did not move anymore, their weapons lay, partly destroyed partly carelessly left on the ground, next to them. Under some of the bodies the ground had taken the colour of red. The soldier, who had searched for the source of the noises, lay among them. In the middle of those lifeless soldiers lay a man Lorane recognized, she moved closer to take a look. The man still held his sword in one hand, his hazelnut brown hair was shining in the light of the moon. Lorane rushed towards him and turned him around so she could see his face.     

Merow had his eyes closed and on his brow, blood was running from a big cut. Lorane shook the slack body of her father and felt how the tears were coming back. She let her head sink down on his chest; there was no pounding to hear. She was unable to say anything, Lorane simply embraced her father’s lifeless body and never wanted to let him go. She cried, she just cried bitterly into herself, why she was here outside she had completely forgotten. Then the quiet laughter sounded again from the alleys, this time it was a bit louder and more malicious than before. Paul shook Lorane softy at her shoulder and tried to loosen her arms from Merow’s body.

“Lorane, come on! You can’t do anything for him, we have to go, they’re already nearby!” he said to her and when she did not answer he quietly added into her ear: „He wanted you to get away from here safely, he wanted to protect you. Do you want us to disappoint your father?”

Lorane looked up to him, sniffed, wiped the tears from her face and shook her head. Softly she let her father sink to the ground and took her hand off his chest. Hesitantly she trudged after Paul and always kept looking back to the dead body until they moved again into another alley. They ran along the main road and could already see the city wall a few hundred metres away. The giant, silver shining gate stood open and no guards could be seen. Without looking around for the soldiers they both ran outside into the open landscape. As fast as he could Paul pulled Lorane after himself and together they ran away over the wet grass towards the south.

“We are we even going?” Lorane suddenly called next to him.

He did not answer right away, instead he looked behind them; he did not see anyone.

“We’re almost there! We just have to get you away from here!”

The moment he said that, Lorane fell out of his sight. He stopped in which he almost fell to the ground himself and looked for her. She lay on the ground and did not move any longer; she seemed to have fallen over. Paul ran to her and as he tried to take her on his back he could see a tiny trickle of blood and a graze on her forehead, but luckily she was only unconscious as he detected. He put her on his back and continued to run. We’re almost there, was going through his mind the entire time.

He came to the end of a small hill and hasted down some stairs which had been carved into the rocks. Two pillars, in which burned a fire, stood next to the staircase and marked the entrance of a tunnel which led in the inside of the mountain. Paul ran past the pillar along the long passage. He believed to clearly hear the steps of the men in the tunnel, the noise when they touched the ground echoed from the walls and into his ears. They did not even run, they were absolutely sure that they would get their prey.

Finally he reached the end of the passageway and entered a small hall, unknowing that the four men were as good as standing behind him. In the hall was a tiny staircase as well which led to a small podium. Paul walked up the stairs, took Lorane from his shoulders and laid her carefully on the ground then he descended back the stairs. He fished Lira’s note out of his trouser pocket and as he opened his mouth to say something, he heard again the quiet, cold laughter behind him. He threw a look over his shoulder.  

„Come on, boy, just let us forget everything and give us the girl.“ their leader said who had taken a step towards Paul.

He did not answer anything and stared at them. He had to try to turn away but there was one thing he just wanted to know.

“Who are you?”

The man in front of him laughed, this time it sounded warmer and then he pulled the black disguise from his face. A young man was standing before Paul, he had a narrow, pale face and under his left eye was a light-coloured scar which ran up to his nose.

How nice of you to ask. My name is Tyranne and I’m the leader of this special warrior unit. We’re the best and strongest of our people and we always get what we want. Apropos” he added and was suddenly serious again. “Give us why we’re here! Give us the girl!“

Paul finally turned back. He could not give them Lorane! On the other hand, they would just come and get her if he did not do so. Against those four men Paul would have had no chance at all, he knew that. Slowly he walked to the podium where Lorane still lay unconscious and did not notice anything of all that. He walked up the stairs then he stood next to the girl and leaned down to her. While he gently put a hand on her arm he quickly whispered words in a strange sounding language which he was reading off Lira’s paper as clearly as possible.

Suddenly Lorane began to glow, Paul yanked back in pain and pulled his hand away. He staggered a few steps back and fell almost to the ground. Lorane started to shine brightly and hovered slightly above the ground.

“WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!” Tyranne shrieked.

Paul fell down the stairs when a blazing flash of light came from Lorane and he was unable to see anything for a few seconds. When he opened his eyes again she had gone without leaving a trace.

Confused and completely baffled he stared at the spot where she had lain only a few seconds ago; with an open mouth he got back up. He had not expected that, Lira had not told him what would happen, she had only told him what to do and then he should wait but Paul had not expected his best friend to vanish into thin air.

“You shouldn’t have done that, boy!”

Paul fell out of his trance and turned around to Tyranne whom he had almost forgotten. He did not know what he should do now and just looked past them without replying anything. Tyranne walked towards him, his companions followed close behind. Paul did not even try to flee, he just closed his eyes and waited.

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